Critiquing

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      Petunia was not happy in her home. She's had to mend three cave-ins this week, alone! The neighbors are so noisy! They thump around all day. Petunia wonders if they even know how they affect her. "They don't care," she sighs aloud.

      "How do you know that? Have you asked them?"

      Who's that, Petunia wondered. Another rude intruder!

      "It's me, Jay-Jay!"

       "Jay-Jay, you scared me!"

and so on...

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      Petunia was not happy in her home. She's had to mend three cave-ins this week, alone! The neighbors are so noisy! They thump around all day. Petunia wonders if they even know how they affect her. "They don't care," she sighs aloud.

      "How do you know that? Have you asked them?"

      Who's that, Petunia wondered. Another rude intruder!

      "It's me, Jay-Jay!"

       "Jay-Jay, you scared me!"

and so on...

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